Space/click to get to the next slide. Please do critique in the comments! I would love to know how to improve, since I really hope for this to get published (this sample is only one page).
This is the story I'm currently working on. I did not plan to share it on Scratch, since it was more of a private thing, but I was running out of ideas. So, yeah. This is the story I'm working on, and this is page 1. ~CHARACTERS~ Ada: she/her, isn't taught about RO (Romantic orientation) or sexuality yet (see 'Backstory') Amelia: she/her, same as Ada ~BACKSTORY~ The backstory is complicated, but anyway, in the future, people are separated into 'Ravens' and 'Doves'. They only learn about academical things, and the 'Birds' (basically like Elders and/or nobility) strongly support knowledge and wisdom. So, at the age of fifteen, teenagers are sent to a chess game, in which they are pieces. If piece a gets piece b, piece b dies and piece a chooses how piece b will die. As well as this, the Birds are queerphobic. They don't educate the Ravens or the Doves about being queer. They do tell them about pronouns, but because of English lessons. Anyway, main characters Ada and Amelia are best friends. Almost sisters. And Ada /might/ like Amelia a little. ~BUNKERS~ The home bunker is where people stay when they become double digits. This is also when they get separated and assigned pieces. The training bunker is where they, well, train. They train for the Game (the chess one in which many people die) and the standards are high. If you weren't focusing, then you would be punished. If you were sick and couldn't make the Game, then they sacrifice you.
