Okay, so a couple weeks I thought to myself: "Why did Silent Dreams become such poor writing?" And after putting it off for weeks I finally dedicated myself to starting the long process of "fixing SD." There were a couple issues the immediately stood out to me, some things that copied @Shattered_Diamond 's Falling Stars-- unintentionally or not-- a couple issues with rushing and lack of description of characters and places. So, yeah, here's the prologue.
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