Click the screen or any key :) So, today I did something a little different. Rather than directly changing the writing, (Editing.) I gave some things I liked, and some things I thought could have been changed. (Critiquing.) Remember, no matter what I say, you don't have to change your writing at all, and it's still really good.
All the sans serif font is completely by @hellohumans207 All serif font is completely by me, @I_Edit_Stories
