Narrator: FluffKit looked up. FluffKit: “What are you all yelling about? When BlueStar was leader, she taught FireStar everything she knew. BlueStar didn’t yell about training a KittyPet, did she? So why are you yelling now? Be proud.” Narrator: FluffKit looked among the clan. It was misshapen and built the wrong way. FireStar and SpikePaw touched noses. FireStar: “RosieKit, you are now RosiePaw. SquirrelFlight will be your mentor.” Narrator: SquirrelFlight and RosiePaw touched noses. FireStar: “RagingKit, you are now RagingPaw. BrambleClaw will be your mentor.” Narrator: RagingKit and BrambleClaw touched noses. FireStar: “FluffKit, you are now FluffPaw. BrackenFur will be your mentor.” Narrator: FluffPaw touched noses with her mentor. A growl was heard from the audience. JayFeather: “No medicine cats? They must all be dumb. LeafPool, can you believe this?” Narrator: JayFeather had said, watching as the fluffy bundle of fur looked up at BrackenFur. FluffPaw: “What are we going to do first?” Narrator: BrackenFur looked down at FluffPaw. BrackenFur: “Lets go see our territory. I want you to see which parts are ours.” Narrator: FluffPaw looked up at him. FluffPaw: “Can we go to the WindClan border first? I want to see if BreezeKit is there!” Narrator: BrackenFur looked at her sternly. BrackenFur: “No. Not to see BreezeKit at least.” Narrator: FluffPaw looked up at him. FluffPaw: “Please?”
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