1. PLEASE CRITIQUE 2. EXCUSE MY MESSY HANDWRITING THAT I SCRIBBLED- I SWEAR I WRITE BETTER THAN THAT 3. be honest w/ constructive criticism :D
"P-P-A-P! I have a pen, I have a apple. Uh! Apple-pen! I have a pen, I have pineapple. Uh! Pineapple-pen! Apple-pen, pineapple-pen. Uh! Pen-pineapple-apple-pen. Pen-pineapple-apple-pen!" jk i just used a pencil and p a p e r + references
