READ THIS BEFORE YOU MAKE YOUR BIOS!! There are many bios that are unsatisfactory recently. There are people who give too short bios, or people who are plain unrealistic. Below is a very exaggerate version of a bio: S T U D E N T B I O : Full Name: Albus|Age: year 2|Birthday: Next week|Gender: Male|Appearance: Looks like Harry|Personality: Daring, brave, everyone loves him and admires him. He is Metamorphagi and Animagi, and he can mind read, teleport, levitate, and everything he glares at will turn to ice|Family: Potters|Friends: Scorp|Wand: Too lazy to take quiz|Patronus: Dad's patronus|Likes/Dislikes: Likes Quidditch, everything Harry and Ginny likes. Dislikes everything Harry and Ginny dislikes|Crush: No one, but everyone has a crush on him|Blood Status:His entire family is pure|Pet: A bear|Others: He is head boy and in Gryffindor, and has the invisibility cloak, the elder wand, and the stone of ressurection. Mistakes: Name: what is his surname? Albus what? Age: Year 2 is not an age. Birthday: We need a specific timing! Next week is not specific enough. Gender: Good enough... Appearance: Although Harry Potter is a main character, you can't look exactly like him. List out your specific features. Personality: You are practically announcing you will be in Gryffindor! And you can't possess someone to like you, you have to earn it. And you cannot be invincible! No normal witch or wizard can teleport or read minds. You also cannot have ANY power without a wand. (Including the Sight) Family: You have to list specific names! Friends: Who is Scorp? His real name is Scorpius Malfoy! Please state the full names and update when you have new friends, or fallen out with old ones. Wand: If you are too lazy to make a Pottermore account, at least make one up! Patronus: You cannot be exactly the same as your father's! Do something special! Likes/Dislikes: List specific items! Crush: Everyone has a crush on him? That's both an assuming statement and a possesive one. We managers hate reading these stuff. Blood Status: No problem, except just put 'pureblood' or 'pure'. Pet: Only choose accpeted pets from Hogwarts! (Owl, toad, cat) Others: You cannot choose your house or your ranking! You cannot posses any famous materials (eg. Three hallows, The Gryffindor sword, the Hufflepuff cup, Ravenclaw Diadem etc.)
READ THIS BEFORE YOU MAKE YOUR BIOS!! There are many bios that are unsatisfactory recently. There are people who give too short bios, or people who are plain unrealistic. Below is a good version of a bio: S T U D E N T B I O : Full Name: Albus Severus Potter|Age: 12, year 2|Birthday: 10 December|Gender: Male|Appearance: Jet black hair that grows wildly, green eyes, knobbly knees, skinny and short, but his skin is rather dark|Personality: Fun, quiet, can be a little rude, has a rather short temper, has ADHD, good at Quidditch, loves to help people, wouldn't say no to a challenge|Family: Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, James Potter, Lily Potter|Friends: Scorpius Malfoy, will update|Wand: Maple, unicorn hair core, 11.5 inch, quite whippy, excellent transfigation|Patronus: Female Stag|Likes/Dislikes: Likes Quidditch, wizard's chess, collecting stamps. Dislikes bullies, prejudice, cowards|Crush: OPEN, will update|Blood Status: Half-blood|Pet: A tawny owl|Others: He is rather afraid of mice, and screams when he sees one. Good Points: Name: Full name, including middle name if you have one. Age: Included age as of this year in Hogwarts and year. Birthday: Gave specific timing Gender: Good enough... Appearance: Gave similar characteristics to Harry, but has rather dark skin, which is a unique feature. Personality: You have some traits, and some disadvantages, including ADHD. (Not that everyone must have a disability, just some disadventages) Family: Listed direct living family, which is good enough. Friends: Gave specific name, and wrote 'will update', which ensures our managers that you will update us if you made new friends, or fallen out with old ones. Wand: Either you took the quiz, or you made your own. Well done! Patronus: Also a stag, but a female version, which is uniquely yours. Likes/Dislikes: Listed specific likes and dislikes. Crush: At least you will update! Blood Status: No problem. Pet: Chosen a specific breed of an owl in the specific range. Others: You stated a weakness! Now you are not invincible, which is good.
