*FIRST OF ALL* I LOVE YOUR COMIC the story, art quality, and effort you put into it is amazing. The storyline fits perfectly with the characters, which makes it really enjoyable to read. XDD ------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have a lot to say about Pebblestar, I'm pretty sure that I shouldn't have drawn him so young... The character design was awesome, and I thought he'd look really hot in human form. Then I realized that he's kinda old, but didn't do anything about it. :p ------------------------------------------------------------------------- I had a really good idea for DriftFire's hairstyle, and then I tried drawing eyes, and nothing looked good, so I may have to redo that panel... :] and the torso, plus body anatomy on this drawing left my dictionary. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is supposed to be the villain dude... WHAT HAVE I DONE ____ 1) I was supposed to draw someone else 2) My mind randomly went to how green and black make a nice color combo. 3) I wanted to draw him with long, dark, hair with a toxic smirk. 4) God HE's HoT 5) AND NOW I'M SIMPING THE MAIN ANTAGONIST IN FoD 6) GREAT --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This took a loooooong time, I decided to put them on the same frame, so I didn't have space for words. Behold Pearlpaw and Quartzpaw THE BELOVED BEAANS! 1. Her hair's a bit dark, and his hair is a bit too light... 2. THEIR DRESS DESIGNS WERE SO HARD TO COME UP WITH 3. I gave Quartzpaw long hair, and I think he'll look FABULOUS when he grows up... that gives me an idea... >:) 4. I was getting 2nd thoughts about their skin tone, but then it kinda sank in. 5. THE WITTLE BEANS THEY ARE PRECIOUS -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Silent Flame : 1) The hairstyle was pAInfUL 2) She be lookin a wee little yellow - GONNA HAVE TO FIX THAT 3) Bangs cause I was too lazy to do the other eye. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Scorchstar 1) I CAN FEEL THE SCORCH 2) I'm actually proud of this since I did it with a MOUSE since my chrome book wasn't working. 3) Sorry I didn't add that much shading, I'll be sure to add that tomorrow ;, ) 4) Ya know, he'd actually look a bit cool if he didn't remind me of my brother, EVEN HIS PERSONALITY +_+ 5) I added the band-aid since I COULDN'T DRAW A NOSE WITH THE MOUSE, and it covered it up well. 6) His eyes are a little different though... I'll make sure to fix that tomorrow as well. -_- -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Characters will be updated Art by Five Characters belong to -CheeryTrees- Time taken : Around 25 min. for each character