I've gotten several questions during my time here on Scratch that ask me things such as "How do you learn to write like that? and "I really want to improve my writing!". Well, let me tell you something. After digging through some of my old old old pieces of writing a few months ago, I found an the beginning of a story that I had written maybe 6 or 7 years ago. It was short, and, quite honestly, not that great. At all. But you know what? I liked the story that I had created (or at least the story I had been planning to write) and I wanted to rewrite it. So I did, and now I'm sharing it with you! In the document linked to below, I've included the original story, my notes when I was preparing to rewrite it, and the rewritten work itself. I'm hoping that by sharing this, I can share a bit of my writing process with you guys and we can all see the improvement - because honestly, I'm proud of it myself! Anyway, here's the link! All writing in the document is mine; please don't copy or steal it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MQelHnUPAP-m4tJz8FkwCvrghiwEXrAFKLMFd_by3m8/edit?usp=sharing ~-Brielle-