okok I realized that making a project would probably be better than to just type a paragraph of feedback like I used to do lol so future critiques are gonna be like this I overdid the thumbnail but it looks good so idc B) I almost forgot how much I love your style :') the way you draw eyes + the lineart and shading, it looks so soft overall this drawing is pretty spot on in terms of anatomy and shading! most of these edits are just minor changes which I thought would make it even better :D low quality agghh 1. original piece 2. I thought the eyes were kinda too far up on her face, which makes her forehead looks small but ofc this could be a stylistic choice 3. shading under her neck is not dark enough imo. there is little contrast in this area so adding a darker shadow would make it look more 3d (I kind of made it too dark though ;v; lmao) - also added some small things like changing the color of the eye highlights, nose, and outlining the band aid?? on her face 4. here I added more shadows and lighting. since the light source is coming from behind, there should be a sharp outline of light on the edges of her hair and jacket. this also helps the character stand out more from the background, which has very similar colors. also added shadows to her jacket for more depth aand that's it! btw I think your art has great potential so keep drawing :0 art by @princess_coding (edits by me) music: telapatía - kali uchis character belongs to @lilacdreamwriter
