1. I think that Moonpaw is a really good charecter even if she fell into the WC med prophacy panic thing 2. Softfur she's such a bad mom carring more about a BUG than her kids 3. Chapter 59 was hilarious 4. Chapters 1-4 were not so fun. It was just perfectpaw being a jerk 5. Pawpawkit and Perfectpaw 6. Boulderbutt and Softfur. 7. and 8. I squished these together because: Brownpaw is underrated he is totally the cat who would jump in front of a car to save a kid while Saffonpaw is overrated. He means well(I think) but is is kind of cold and analytical and I think in that same place he would tell you just how likely based on the amount of traffic the street gets that a car would have come right then 9. Nope, I really liked 10. What’s your overall opinion on toph? 11. Anything else to add?