Pls read the short prologue, I'm rly bad at descriptive language. So if you have any helpful comments pls tell me because it could be a very big help.
And also pls don't say rude comments about my story. I am not a talented writer so if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything. Pls don’t remake bc then ppl might think u made the story and I don’t think you should get credit. Ynow, bc you didn’t write it.