this is just a short lil lighthearted rant about some of the critiques I got on my short essay in English class :D 1.Apparently, my typed handwriting in google docs with the standard font and sizing is terrible and impossible to read. I am just laughing at this bc not only did everyone else who typed theirs used the same font and size IT ISN'T MY HANDWRITING ur right my handwriting does suk! THAT'S WHY I FLIPPING TYPED IT :"D I still find this too funny lol 2. I gave 'too much' evidence Not sure if this was directed at me supporting my claim or my citing but I'm going to assume it was at my citing even tho both were in reason I only put two links below the essay with the heading of "Credits" and said, "according to several studies..." ONCE less funny but stilllll 3. It's good but too focused on humor instead of smiling excuse me. THE PROMPT WAS ASKING ABOUT HUMOR don't know what else to really say I think they somehow misread the prompt? :3 4. The only other piece of 'critique' I found the slightest bit helpful said that my opening line was a bit weak. I get this- not the most hooking thing but I mean basically everyone else started the exact same way soooooo- meh better critique than anyone else so I can't fault them too much I mean everyone besides these four people said "good" "Good" "gud" or "It's good" so eh :) I found the handwriting one the funniest tho- Don't know why I bothered to type this up I'll prob not share it-? *Three minutes later processed to share it, cause I need to post more*
