I made an actual part one to this series. They will get better as I get more confident with my stories, I'm not good with starts/beginnings when I have to draw them out. And again I'm going to make another cover for this.
I will try to do it online, or at least make it better on paper, but school gets in the way so it might take a while, and I had to do the last few scenes in the car to get it done. But, what do you think?