Next: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/829740530/ Previous: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/773592717 First: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/504689987 Edit: the rant below is kind of negative but I'm keeping it because (a) posterity and (b) it amuses me. Y'all are honestly being SO sweet, thank you for the response this has been getting <3 -guys this is terrible -you don't have to read any of this you can just read the chapter which is the important part of this project not my rant but I'm going to write it cause I'm annoyed -twenty-two pages and it's all junk except for when Gisela says "teenagers" in the most done voice ever -and that bit about the little whisper of panic, I like that part -okay, and Percy being all epic and rawr -I might just rewrite the whole thing but make it from Percy's POV cause honestly I like him so much better than Keefe -and the entire story is written terribly -over 200 people have seen chapter one and chapter one is Not Good -neither is this one but at least it's better -I don't WANT to finish the story but I DEFINITELY don't want to be one of those writers who abandons the story halfway -maybe I'll just switch to Percy and Annabeth's POV for the whole thing -or Gisela's -guys Lady Gisela is really fun to write -I have a whole playlist for her -ok it's only like three songs but it counts -anyway idk how to do pacing and tension when I write stuff and it's the worst because those are Important Things to Know and ugh -oh I forgot! the whole advanced levels of abilities! idk it's just something I came up with and I think it makes sense -let me know what you think of it? -other things I would like to hear from y'all: whether I should make a studio for this story if you would like to be put on/taken off the update list what you think will happen in the next chapter what you want to happen in the next chapter your favorite character if you have any ideas for what should happen bc I'm a little stuck -anyway if you got through all that you deserve a butterblast! *hands you butterblast* -I need to go wash the car now -have a good day
