Please tell me if I made them a Mary/Gary sue. Tell me if I need to add, remove or change anything, and I'll do it with no hesitation as soon as I get the notification. Imma Do a drawing of her when she was alive soon TIMELINE MIGHT MAKE NO SENSE SOB, MIGHT EDIT LATER, WAS KINDA RUSHED CAUSE I ZONED OUT WHILE DOING IT LOL PRETEND GEM SAYS SPARKY Name: Eclipse ` Moon (Originally just Eclipse) Nickname: Eccy, Moon Named After: The Moon, and Eclipses Gender/Pronouns: Genderflux, She/He/They (Birth Gender: Intersex) Sexuality: Polyamory, Omnisexual Quick Run Down On Appearance: Moon is one of the larger spirits. Little to no Moon spirits are taller than her. She seems to have a 'cutie mark' of a moon and star. All the white on her glows. She used to have an Azalea Kirin on her ear, until she gave it to a tunneller, let's call them Sparky (See Mouse, in @CrosscutRhino75 s entry). The fluff on her neck is actually the head tuft, it's long an goes over her shoulder. Her neck is actually black. She is very fluffy. When it's winter, her coat gets much bigger, which she uses to engulf other cats in. Personality (What She Shows): She is a strong and confident leader who doesn't hesitate to take things into her own hands. She is extremely kind, and always gives others more chances (unless they did something dreadful). She is very intelligent. She is also very skilled in combat. Personality (What She Doesn't Show): She secretly blames herself for not being able to save her best friend (a tunneller who was brutally unalived, see Sparky). She is scared of failing. Clan/Rank: She was a Captain in the Moor Colony, and now she's a Moon Spirit Strengths (2+): She is very slick. Despite her size, she can fit into very small spaces. She is cunning and intelligent. She is very strong, able to gracefully go through mud and rough waters, despite her weight. She has amazing senses. She is able to change her entire personality in a blink of an eye, once she made someone believe she had a twin. (CONTINUES IN NOTES AND CREDITS)
READ INSTRUCTIONS, IT STARTS THERE Weaknesses (2+): The glow of her own body can easily give her a headache, due to her having amazing eye sight. If she changes personality for an hour or so, that personality sticks for a while, and even after a few days, there is still traces of that personality before it disappears after a week or two. Despite not showing it, going into unbelievably small spaces really hurts her. She is terrified of failing. She isn't the best at comforting. She gets nightmares a lot, so sometimes she refuses to sleep, which causes her to stay awake for days on end, ending up with her being absolutely buggered. She can't sheathe her claws, they are always out. She can easily get hot, due to her having so much fur, although her body hates the cold, even though she loves it, so she's kind of just stuck in the middle. Backstory: She was born in the Moor Colony. She met Sparky and they became best friends. The two were inseparable. They both trained together, even though Moon was to take the path of a councillor, and Sparky was to take the path of a tunneller. They had really good lives. One day, Moon had become a Lieutenant, and then Captain. This made her super happy. Although not long after, Moon was killed. After she became a Spirit, she decided to watch over Sparky. She watched Sparky hand the flower over to Flame, which Moon didn't mind. But when she had witnessed her best friend getting brutally unalived, she became depressed. Everything around her just disappeared. A few seconds later, she felt something. She looked up to see Sparky there, as a Sun spirit. They shared the tightest hug, both of them were crying, happy to finally be together again. Since then, they hung out a lot, and even started watching over Flame. Soon after, Sparky and Moon got attached to Flame, and are now Flame's guardians. Soon after, Sparky and Moon started to date, despite some not supporting that two different spirits were together. OTHER: Moon can control the intensity of her glow, from barely existing to being more blinding than the sun. She is like a guardian angel to Flame. Moon is also close to Mouses' parents, and sometimes they cross paths and have a talk. ACCESSORIES + EXTRA: Moons 'Cutie Mark' always shines brighter than the rest of the body.
