[IT IS RECOMMENDED YOU READ THE BAD ENDING FINALE BEFORE YOU READ THIS ONE] (oh yeah and read this ending before scrolling) (warning, it'll be cringe *sob) This is how I wanted the story to originally end, but I decided against it when I got a better idea. If I was going to go this route, the chapters would've been written differently. For one, Zayden wouldn't kill as many innocent people. Secondly, some of the group would still be alive. (Lily, Radix, Virdis, Axton, Traves, etc.) Thirdly, Dennis and his freakshow weren't ever apart of the story originally, so Zayden doesn't go crazy Secondly, Zayden would actually die in this one. I know, heartbreaking. But it would set up the Epilogue (which I thought of writing) but decided against it. I already decided on the ending when I wrote the First Chapter. I'd go the RICK GRIMES route >:3 The bad ending seemed just MUCH cooler to write and I really wanted to get it out. So yeah... Here's how The Frozen Fall was originally supposed to end. (i wrote this during spring break LAST YEAR lol)
this is just to keep you people entertained while I struggle to find time to work on reborn school's been kicking me in the behind for a while now, so sorry it's taking so long