to all my followers unaffiliated with this all, i apologize, this should stop once we make our shared account! anyways on with the writing (this is literally all subject to change as the screenwriters see fit, this is pretty much just for fun, and to start the writing conversation. sorry its so long) (EVERY CUT OF THE CAMERA IS A NUMBERED SCENE FYI) (Scenes 0? i count this as one since there's no characters yet) BAM TITLE SEQUENCE. I'll figure out what that entails eventually I swear. (SCENE #1)opening with the main trio walking down a sidewalk, it is just before dawn. puddles are at the side of the road as if it had rained overnight. they stop at a doorstep. (SCENE #2)(press space to see my general idea) the fox knocks at the door and turns to the bear. we've caught them mid conversation! "Don't worry, (bear's name), you'll see! Those overgrown earthworms are nothing to be afraid of!" ("overgrown earthworms" stated like an insult. he seems more dismissive than concerned about (bear's name)). the light above the door illuminates them as they speak. (bear's name) only responds with an anxious noise. Florence opens the door, and they exchange a few words. they go inside. cut to inside, (SCENE #3) Ollie is in there (space again to see how i envision the inside) at the front desk Florence hands the supplies to the fox, who immediately shoves them into the bird and bears' arms (honestly this will be so short I'll say scene #3.5) and the fox walks towards the window. (SCENE #4) you can see dawn light through the window, and the reflection of (fox's name)'s face, with a confident smile and bright eyes, arms crossed behind his back and standing up straight. (heres where i get less specific. florence and the guys chatter i suppose for a few scenes, all while the fox is still at the window.) (SCENE #?(5)) the fox turns around. "Well we've done almost all that needs to be done, and all before dawn! All that's left now is to visit Mister (inventor guy) and get to work! We'll go down in history, so I hope you're all ready!" The bear looks uncomfortable, glancing off to the side. the bird looks excited! they file out of the building, end scene. (SCENE #?(6)) cut to the inventor guy doing something with a screwdriver or something, when there's a knock at the door. he looks almost confused at first, but then his expression lightens *somewhat* as he realizes who it must be. ik i stopped abruptly but keep in mind this isnt even my job to do, so. screenwriters you can go edit and continue this how you all see fit.
