Trapped up in a tower Surrounded by pink flowers You already know who I mean But she’s not what she seems Forced to brush her hair by the hour But she wants to just say no Oh, Rapunzel, I see you up there Won’t she let you cut your hair? Oh, I hear you, not today She didn’t listen when you told her, She said, ‘wait till you’re older’ Don’t worry, I think you’re handsome either way So lonely in that tower Rapunzel can only glower Staring into his mirror Wishing he could convince her But she has all the power And she always says no Oh Rapunzel, let’s not talk about the pain I wanted to ask, did you come up with a name? Oh, I hear you, not today She not willing to hear it She thinks you’re throwing a fit I think you’re brave, no matter what she says Rapunzel, won’t you come down? Why bother sticking around? Don’t you think we could run away We could do it now, today Oh, Rapunzel, are you ready to go? You could be free right now, you know Oh, I hear you, not today She told you you are a girl She said you’re a blight on this world Well, I think you’re handsome either way
Basically I had this idea and I just had to write it, tell me how you think it could be better! I mostly focused on the lyrics, I haven’t tried to sing this or anything yet, so I guess it’s technically just a poem so far
