~OPEN~ Graystripe MAP Cold Water

Instructions

========================================= RULES ========================================= 1. Don't put insane amounts of blood. (The only scenes with blood should be in parts 13 & 14) 2. Only go off the script. 3. If you think I am mistaken with events in the script, let me know. (BEFORE YOU COMMENT ABOUT CERTAIN EVENTS BEING INCORRECT, READ EVERYTHING. I MIGHT EXPLAIN WHY I WANT IT TO BE DIFFERENT!!) 4. Deadline per part: 1-2 weeks. 5. Max parts: 2 6: MUST BE A REMIX 7: HAVE FUN!! (Lip-syncing optional) ========================================= Part 1. (Time: 15.68) Script: Graykit in the nursery with Willowpelt and Pachpelt. Part 2. (Time: 15.51) Script: Graypaw finding and attacking Rusty then relaxing and grooming his fur. Part 3. (Time: 11.13) Script: Graypaw and Firepaw playfight and train. They hunt and do border patrols. And have their warrior ceremonies. Part 4. (Time: 12.26) Script: Graystripe gets his first apprentice, Brackenpaw, along with Fireheart {CINDERPAW} and they go out together with their apprentices. Part 5. (Time: 10.10) Script: Graystripe falls into the river and Silverstream saves him. Graystripe stares at Silverstream, blushing. Part 6. (Time: 10.10) Script: They meet and rub against each other, groom each other's fur, and Silverstream attempts to teach him to swim (Fails). Part 7. (Time: 10.96) Script: Fireheart finds out and gets angry and attempts to get Silverstream to stop seeing Graystripe. Graystripe finds out and gets mad. They fight. (Physically) Part 8. (Time: 10.40 Script: Silverstream gives birth to Graystripe's kits and dies. (If you do this part, pls find a way to make her say, "I love you Graystripe, goodbye.") Part 9. (Time: 9.88) Script: Graystripe leaves with his kits, Fireheart is sad. Part 10. (Time: 10.79) Script: Graystripe returns, but is captured by Twolegs. Part 11. (Time: 12.48) Script: He meets Millie, he blushes, they make their way back to the Clans. Part 12. (Time: 10.53) Script: Millie has their kits. The tree falls into the hollow and Briarlight becomes lame (Unable to walk) in her back legs. Part 13. (Time: 11.05) Script: Graystripe fights bravely in the Great Battle. Part 14. (Time: 12.35) Script: Firestar kills Tigerstar, who fades, then is crushed by a tree. Part 15. (Time: 10.79) Script: Graystripe mourns along with the other Clans and Sandstorm, Squirrelflight, and Leafpool. Part 16. (Time: 9.36) Script: Graystripe and Mille at Firestar's vigil. Then Sandstorm dies and Alderheart returns. The Clan mourns. Part 17. (Time: 15.33) Script: Then Graystripe and Millie are in the elder's den and die peacefully together as the scene moves up to the clouds where Graystripe, Firestar, Sandstorm Silverstream, and Millie are in StarClan's hunting grounds hanging out. (I know Millie dies AFTER Graystripe in the series, but I thought it'd be cute if they died together. :D) ========================================= TNE Entries ========================================= 9/10 TNE spots taken! ATTENTION: I will only accept a TNE if I like it more than the one I did. When these ten TNE spots are taken and finished, I will judge them. 1. (Done) 2. 3. @ 4. @ 5. @ 6. @ 7. @ 8. @ 9. @ 10. @