I feel like this is super cringy so if it is plzzz lmk. I tried not writing about d3ath or obviously lgbtq++ stuff 4 once so here's how that worked :P
If picture is hard to read see here, the actual poem has better spelling than typed. I'll jump thru puddles w u; I'll tire thru mountains We could get ice cream after If they'll allow it. You wouldn't care wut they think, I (line edited) Couldn't be more concerned When they would post, (line separated below) When they would laugh, I shouldn't fight them. But you would... that Could be good, but I don't want danger I wanna b left alone When the grounds all shake And the towers all fall You tell me please? That u will protect me? And I'll try Try to protect you back I shouldn't care anymore But, those voices take such a toll I used to, Talk for hours I still Talk for hours cause I can't No I can't shut my mouth. And we'll try To keep things tight But my mind It always starts a fight And you might say It's hard to struggle through But I promise you We'll make it out alive! So yeah, constructive feedback totally wanted and welcome. I'm planning on submitting it for a thing at school. I'm in highsvhool. Edit:: oww my pinky but the one on my right foot really hurts rn cuz I was running in the house to see what my mom wanted and I've been hyper today idk why I can't get a break so I ran and kinda smashed it into a cabinet and owchies I'm just telling myself I'm being w3ak and it'll fix soon enough. That always helps. So im typing this wile in pa1n :/ hadda vent sorry