Myoosick (what does that even mean??) anyways here's my opinion on the original song (and also a link to the """better""" version) honestly the notes are all over the places, and the (very loud) drums don't help. the notes aren't connected together and i feel like you just placed notes here and there and said "welp that's all i can do". i'm sorry but at this point i have to a give a "i don't like this song". i'm sorry, but hey, you tried. here's some recommendations on how to improve: - take inspiration from other songs - use a scale to stick to - don't have your notes leap or even jump by octave too much, it'll get too messy - have others listen before you publish it - balance the audio between channels (very important!) anyway here's the song link: https://jummbus.bitbucket.io/debug/#j5N0c%5C%C3%96%2Fn310s0k0l00e03t2ma7g0fj07r1O_U00000000i0o321T0v0pu13f010o500q040Oad030w5h1E0T0v0pu10f0000qg410Oad040w2h0E0T8v0pu1bf010s500q040Oad030w2h0M0479bbdddffffhhhhhjjjjjjllllllllMIFDBBzzzxxxxvvvvvttttttrrrrrrrrE0T2v0pu15f180q040Oad030w0E0b4zg0000000014g000000000h000000004h400000000p23qFyVjgy8lczM2oKnAogmwbw0KoK2Q830cxAcRkISxqY3jbZ5w5GJj5Gki-HgSugakODjEkapN-Wj8Z6CCtfEm6svFkcczQM6mhWA_IIRZacANsAhQ2ewa5cn0ye15EBY4b95Wp7wiBcnjao0m1ag5cn1AOD8U2Cq-yCbFkF6B0g4wCsvI0aoEglWlizjw4xhpcz5QNhqFl5ElsLnFQWs1Crem00 song rating: 4.5/10 my version: 6.25/10
