Hi This is the first draft of the prologue of a new story I'm writing Sorry about the length (2,842 words) I'll probably need to edit this a lot because I tend to write really late at night
If there's anything I can improve upon for this and later chapters, feel free to give some constructive criticism I've been working on this one story for almost 10 months now so be prepared for 10 months of planning to come slap us both in the face later