I THINK THAT DA MUSIC IS PERFECT CUZ ITS LIKE FIGHTING, AND HOLLOW IS KINDA LIKE FIGHTING TO LIVE KINDA......AND HES NOT AFRAID...and i changed it to secrets....i might change it again LEFT AND RIGHT ARROWS! Once again, Hollow is a boy...obviasly....and in da end...its kinda sad... :*( Note to viewers: POOR HOLLOW SHIN!!!!! OH! IN CHAPTER 6 IT SAYS THAT HE WAS A LITTLE SMALL *MIST SAYS DAT* IT MEANS DAT DA MOM THOUGHT HE WAS READY TO BE ON HIS OWN, BUT WAS TOO YOUNG.....AND I JUST REALIZED DAT HE HADNT EATEN IN LIKE A DAY, ILL MAKE HIM EAT IN DA NEXT CHAPTER THO ALSO, IN DA DRAWING OF THE FIRST PAGE OF CHAPTER SIX, I MADE PURPLE FLOWER TOO TALL, JUST IGNORE DAT!