Story is below. It's great! V The moon was high in the murky sky. Sky was lagging behind Cluster. "Hurry up. Those clan cats might still be following us." He sounded slightly panicked. "Clan cats can't be that bad." Sky mewed, shortly after. "They can be REALLY bad. They did drive us out of our old territory." He grumbled. "But...if Soar didn't say we were hunting here, we would still be home, cozy, not making a mess out of ourselves!" She sounded irritated. "Well, excuse you, I was just being honest." The brown tabby mewed from behind. "Clans are more functional then a group of loners." She commented. "No they aren't! With there dumb beliefs, StarClan?" Cluster snapped. "We believe in cats before us, groups of loners and rouges." Sky mewed, her tail high with bravery. "Mouse-brained, beetle-breathed, mutt-faced, badger-clawed, rotten-tailed, crow-food eating idiot!" Cluster yowled, batting her in the side sharply. "Well, so-rry." She rolled her sky blue eyes. They were quiet as they traveled. A yowl broke the silence. "We have found a place to den." Night, a black tom with white dots, yowled. "In this cave." He leaded the cats into a hollow mountain, full of creases and cracks to make dens. The swarm of cats, probably about 1,000 of them, explored the new camp. "This could be the nursery!" Backstory, a white tabby she-kit, mewed. "Your right!" Her brother, Tree, a dark ginger tom-kit, cheered. Night started choosing which dens were which. The guards slept near entrance to watch for unwanted guests. Nursery was in the back, elders in the side, leaders den, in the middle, medicine cat across from the elders den, and apprentices slept next to the warriors den. Sky sighed, as she drifted to sleep in her new home. The sky was dark red. Black trees stood tall in the misty night. Dew formed around Sky's nose. She sneezed into the silence. Dried ferns sprouted near a dark, murky lake. A figure appeared before her. It was a cat, a large, bulky cat, with a dark brown tabby pelt, a scar across his muzzle and a torn ear. His amber eyes were the brightest thing in the fog. "Step forward, Sky." It whispered. His voice was crisp and deep, full of hate and disgust. "Who are you?" Sky asked, doubt in her glance. "Tigerstar..." He growled. His mew sent a shiver down her back. "Run..." He whispered. Suddenly, she heard heavy paw steps. He was chasing her. She speeded away. Running faster then she ever did in the mortal world. Her pads were scraped on the sharp stones. Tigerstar was hot on her pads. She dashed down hills and though dark water. Tears streamed from her eyes. Fear rushed through her. A sudden pain made her go limp. She could feel her body being ripped apart, slowly. "I just want to run!" Her eyes swung open. A scar down her side was bore. Tigerstar's voice still echoed in her ears. "Step forward, Sky...........Step forward Sky......step.............................................................." -claws slice through you-
Thank you to Badgerkit and warriorcatsplayer. There's were better.
