I really enjoyed reading this piece! I enjoy your choice of words and the way you weave it all together into a story that both entertains and brings emotions and experiences to light. You perfectly express the way the performers are feeling and what they must do, the way they drop everything to entertain. The only problem I had with this piece was that it seems a bit distant; it doesn't particularly ensnare me or get me invested in the performers' emotions, but that might just be me. Overall, I think this is a really interesting piece and I like the style!
word count: 102 piece: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/930214405/
