This is a contest entry, not the SWC one. Please tear it apart. Literally tell me how you'd write it, restructure it, correct every miniscule grammar choice (I am british though so the u in some words will be correct :P) It'd be much appreciated! My given criterea were: Under 1k, Titled: Back Once More, Must feature A map and the line of dialogue "That's not how I remember it."
