NOT THE FINAL CONCEPT JUST AN IDEA!!! Chapter 1 Fernhawk: Nice catch spiderpaw! Spider: thanks! ( eyes gleam with pride) Fireflypaw: pfff I guess for a kit ( rolling eyes) Spider: I AM NOT A KIT! I am 7 moons!(fur standing) Fernhawk: hey- Fireflypaw: oh surrreee you stupid excuse for an insect (in background mentor: that’s enough) you’re not even supposed to be training with me! Your only doing it because your mentor died and your leader thought it would be a good idea to let a deformed baby train with another clan Spider: (about to attack and crying) aghhhhg- Fernhawk: I SAID THATS ENOUGH! Spider and fireflypaw stunned Fireflypaw: geez I was just joking… Fernhawk: fine, if you were then apologize Fireflypaw: FINE! (Stomps over) I’m sorry for calling you an insect… and I’m sorry that… I called you a kit Fernhawk: good. Now let’s get back to camp Fireflypaw: you coming? (Smirks) crybaby (glaring at spider) spider: THATS IT! ( spider throws himself at her and rips out fur they fight until the other app finally scratches him but a little bit to hard) Spider: AGHHH!!! It hurts it hurts! (Blood forming a pool) Fernhawk: quick! We have to get him back to camp! Spider: ( faints just heard distorted talking, eyes slightly open and than close) Omg the whole time I wrote her instead of him for Fireflypaw lol chapter 2 Flowertail: OH! Your up! You lost a lot of blood, I'm glad fernhawk could smell the matalic of the blood or else you would be done for Are you hungry? berrypaw: Oh! ummmm are you? I caught you a rabbit spiderpaw. Spiderpaw: Thanks! I'm starving! Want to share? Berrypaw: OH! sure! Spiderpaw: hey is that a snapdragon on your ear? That's my favorite kind of flower! Berrypaw; Yeah it is!... you can have the rest of the rabbit... spiderpaw: Oh thanks! Berrypaw; I have to get to training... uh see you later! Spiderpaw: See you later spiderpaw walks back in to the med den and falls asleep he has a dream about his past when his mom got killed by a fox and no one cared and they almost said something that u will find out later spiderpaw wakes up in a daze spiderpaw walks out of the den and sees a snap dragon, his eyes glow and starts crying happy tears, he smiles up at the stars and moon and whispers thank you while blushing heavily
