I'm looking for constructive feedback if anyone's willing to give it! Story - This is Goldenpaw/strike. He was threatened by dark forest cats, that if he didn't train with them, they'd unalive him. Goldenpaw trains with a particularly nasty cat, Gingerwhisker, who's been in the dark forest a long time and is developing mutations. Goldenpaw, now Goldenstrike is constantly injured by Gingerwhisker, before waking up to his mate and two kits, Blizzardkit and Brightkit.
wow this is lazy Song by Jack Stauber Drawn and animated by @ShadeStormy_Skywing
