So uh, I basically rewrote this whole thing- I hope that’s okay. Also yeah I think technically in the animation industry camera shots are called scenes, but to preserve my pea brain I’ll call them shots anyways Also I love the name Pearlene for the bird, so that’s what I’ll call her here Shot 1: Early morning, rain puddles everywhere. The fox, bear, and Pearlene are walking together, and they reach a doorstep. The bear knocks on the door. Shot 2: Ollie opens the door slightly. “Um. Mum? There are… people out here.” Florence calls back, “Let them in, it’s alright!” Shot 3: Ollie opens the door completely, and the trio enter. “Thank you for your help, Miss Florence…” The bear says quietly. “Yeah! This’ll make a huuuge difference! We’re golden! We’re practically famous already!” Florence brings over a large box, and hands it to the fox. It’s clearly heavy, and he puts it down immediately, letting the bear take it. Shot 4: Pearlene walks around the shop, glancing at tools and various machines. “Not already. We have a whole mission to complete, you know? Destroy the eartheaters, save the world?” Shot 5: Ollie stiffens and stares at the fox. “You’re really gonna do all that?” “And more, kid! Every problem we’ve ever had? We’ll fix them all!” The bear glances out the window. “We should go.” Shot 6: The fox looks at either a watch or a clock. “Oh, you’re quite right! No time for idle chatter, we can do that when we return.” Shot 7: The fox runs out the door, and the bear and Pearlene follow. Shot 8: It cuts to the cat inventor, checking papers and settings repeatedly. The door knocks, and he runs to the door, almost slamming into it. “You’ve arrived! He’s getting… impatient.” His smile fades, and he looks over his shoulder. Shot 9: Everyone’s standing around the time machine, whatever it may be. “It works? It really does?” Pearlene asks. “It should. I’ve been at this for… I don’t remember how long. But I know this’ll work!” Shot 10: A voice comes from upstairs. “It better.” Someone comes down the stairs, approaching the group. So anyways yeah this could all be edited and stuff, this is just a general idea mainly. Also kinda a potential villain for the series revealed at the end, too!
